Twenty Four
I’ve made some progress on the script and officially flipped from ‘do I have enough to fill a chapter?’ to ‘oh no will all this fit?’
Also hopefully will be posting a fanfic chapter this weekend.
I’ve made some progress on the script and officially flipped from ‘do I have enough to fill a chapter?’ to ‘oh no will all this fit?’
Also hopefully will be posting a fanfic chapter this weekend.
minor criticism: i think i know who’s talking in the last panel (first bubble xeha, second bubble vrak?) but it’s a bit hard to tell for certain just from context clues
You got the speakers correctly
It could be any of them speaking the lines and it would still get the same general point across, there isn’t going to be any perfunctory execution…unless there’s a reason.